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DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS ESSAY IN IELTS WRITING TASK 2

Nguyễn Thị Trung Kiên - 18/03/2023

"Some people believe that robots and artificial intelligence will play a crucial role in our future, while others argue that they will have a negative impact on society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion"

Một số người tin rằng robot và trí tuệ nhân tạo sẽ đóng vai trò quan trọng trong tương lai của chúng ta, trong khi những người khác lại cho rằng chúng sẽ có tác động tiêu cực đến xã hội. Thảo luận cả hai quan điểm và đưa ra ý kiến của bạn.

Outline:

Views	Arguments	Examples
Positive view	- Efficiency and productivity will increase.	Robots can perform tasks faster and more accurately than humans, reducing errors and saving time.
	- New job opportunities will emerge.	The development and maintenance of robots will require a workforce with specialized skills, leading to new job opportunities.
	- Dangerous or repetitive tasks can be performed by robots.	For example, robots can be used to explore space, work in hazardous environments, or assemble complex products.
Negative view	- Unemployment and income inequality will increase.	As robots replace human workers, many people may lose their jobs and struggle to find new ones.
	- Social isolation may increase.	With the rise of artificial intelligence, people may have fewer opportunities to interact with each other, leading to social isolation.
	- Dependence on technology may have negative consequences.	If people become overly reliant on technology, they may lose important skills and become vulnerable to disruptions in technology.
Own opinion and conclusion	- Balancing the benefits and risks is crucial.	While robots and artificial intelligence can bring significant benefits, it is important to weigh these against the potential risks and negative impacts on society.
Own opinion and conclusion	-Summarize the main points discussed in the essay. Restate your personal opinion on the topic and the reasons for it.	We must continue to invest in the development of these technologies while also being mindful of their potential risks and taking steps to mitigate them.

Vocabulary and Phrases:

English Pronunciation Vietnamese

Artificial intelligence /ɑːr.tɪˈfɪʃ.əl ɪnˈtel.ɪ.dʒəns/ Trí tuệ nhân tạo

Automation /ɔː.təˈmeɪ.ʃən/ Tự động hóa

Robotics /rəˈbɑː.tɪks/ Công nghệ robot

Algorithms /ˈæl.ɡə.rɪ.ðəm/ Thuật toán

Sensors /ˈsensərs/ Cảm biến

Data analysis /ˈdeɪ.tə əˈnæl.ə.sɪs/ Phân tích dữ liệu

Productivity /ˌprɑːdʌkˈtɪvəti/ Năng suất lao động, hiệu suất sản xuất

Malfunction /mælˈfʌŋkʃn/ Sự cố kỹ thuật, trục trặc

Model answer

Introduction:

The emergence of technology and artificial intelligence has been a topic of heated debate in recent times. While some argue that robots and AI will revolutionize the way we live, work, and learn, others contend that they pose a significant threat to humanity. In this essay, I will explore both sides of the argument and offer my own opinion on the issue.

Body Paragraph 1:

On the one hand, advocates/ proponents of AI and robotics argue that they will play a crucial role in shaping our future. With the advent of automation and robotics, many jobs that are dangerous, tedious, or repetitive can be performed by machines. For instance, robots can be used in manufacturing industries to perform complex tasks that require precision and speed, which can improve productivity and reduce human error. Additionally, AI and machine learning can help with data analysis, identifying patterns that humans may miss. This can be particularly useful in fields like medicine where large amounts of data need to be analyzed quickly and accurately.

Body Paragraph 2: On the other hand, opponents/critics of technology and AI argue that they will have a negative impact on society. One of the main concerns is that automation and robotics will lead to job displacement, as machines will replace human labor. This could result in widespread unemployment, income inequality, and social unrest. In addition, there are concerns about the potential for AI to become too intelligent and become a threat to human safety. For instance, if an autonomous weapon system were to malfunction, it could cause catastrophic damage.

Body Paragraph 3 ( opinion):

Despite these concerns, I believe that AI and robotics will have a positive impact on society. While it is true that they may lead to job losses in some areas, they will also create new jobs in fields such as programming and robotics maintenance. Moreover, AI and robotics have the potential to make our lives easier and safer. For instance, sensors can be used to monitor environmental conditions and detect potential safety hazards in real-time. Additionally, algorithms can be developed to predict and prevent accidents, making our lives safer.

Conclusion: In conclusion, while technology and AI have the potential to revolutionize the way we live and work, they also pose significant risks and challenges to society. Therefore, it is important to carefully consider the implications of technology and AI on various aspects of human life and to develop ethical frameworks that ensure their responsible use. Personally, I believe that we should embrace technology and AI, but not at the cost of human dignity, equality, and well-being.

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